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Donatello+April 'NinjaVanish (Censored) by JasmineAlexandra Donatello+April 'NinjaVanish (Censored) by JasmineAlexandra
So it seems that my original comic REALLY did do a ninja vanish! It seems that for some reason I got told on & my original comic got deleted... which I really thought is unfair considering that there was only a bra showing... which I really think is not that inappropriate. But maybe I am more laid back than most... I guess...
I really dislike censorship...I am sure there are reasons for it though. I am not sure but I think I got reported or something. I guess this is my first really romantic comic. I got to learn to work around the system I guess....
So instead of just having a rating I decided to censor it myself. I put in what I might think was too far & blacked or put a logo over it...mainly April's purple brassier... BUT let's not forget the FACT that in the show Kids Next Door, they showed Bras there... they even had it as a weapon called B.R.A. (Battle Ready Armor) which I guess if your wearing it for violence then it is okay...)
But I digress.... anyway...so here it is... for ALL my viewers & I have censored it my way... Sorry for the comic's ninja vanish...


I wanted to have Donnie....well knowing his attitude & him finally getting what he has been after...which is April, that he sometimes gets a little...well a bit enthusiastic... he really likes her & he likes to show it... it is like that they say.... Once you go nerd...you never turn back. BTW... they are just kissing... just that. Just making out really... so yeah... no naughty things.

I do not own the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles or any of the characters. I am just an insignificant insect that is just a fan. All characters belong to © 2012 Viacom International Inc. All Rights Reserved. TEENAGE MUTANT NINJA TURTLES and all related titles, logos and characters are trademarks of Viacom International Inc. Based on characters created by Peter Laird and Kevin Eastman.

The UNEDITED version is at my TUMBLR page at [link] First half is here >[link]< & second half is here >[link]<

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:iconmustang1001:
Critique by Mustang1001 Jun 15, 2013, 5:52:36 PM
You are an amazing artist, this comic is definitely going into my favourites, please continue, I'm sure many Deviantart visitors want to see page three,the drawing technique you used is simple but some how you made it into such a unique skill, as I said continue, I love this couple, I love the amounts of fluff, and I absolutely love the humour, this is amazing work! And if you continue, if its not for me, continue for the fans of Donatello X April! There aren't enough Don X April art work out on the Internet. I enjoyed reading the pages you have even though there is only two, they show the amount of skill you possess!
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Wow... Amazing! LOVE IT it is so perfect couldn't have done a Donni+April as good as this! I really encourage you to create more, thrive for the perfect piece. I also love the turtle's. but I'm not as good as this! I like deviant art because it inspires me, I know how people think a turtle and a human is kind of weird but I don't think of Donni as a Turtle.... I think of him as a Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle!!! Key word MUTANT. so I give you Complete Props! Congrates your on my favorites now thank you for inspiration.
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:iconroseandarkholm:
RoseAnDarkholm Featured By Owner May 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
i love how much smaller she is then Splinter XD
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:icongrellgirl16:
grellgirl16 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2015
OG GOD THAT WAS AMAZING! I almost had a nosebleed :iconcomputernosebleedplz: ...too late XD
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:iconbink1999:
Bink1999 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how Splinter just popped in, ruining April's gloating about evading Mikey and Donnie. :D
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:iconapritelloislife:
ApritelloIsLife Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015
You know, it makes a lot more sense when you read the uncensored version. I was freaking out looking for something she was wearing that was purple.
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:iconphoto-ninja:
photo-ninja Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2015
how... how did she stick to the roof??
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:iconsoulandmakalove:
soulandmakalove Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2015
i freaked out when i saw there was a squeal! 
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:iconapritelloislife:
ApritelloIsLife Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015
Make more :D
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:iconvinnievannwham:
vinnievannwham Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Fantastic! More please.
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:iconwinged-wonder-fish:
Winged-Wonder-Fish Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Iloveit
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:iconminkalina:
Minkalina Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
Please do more of these apritello comic strips!! *___* I totally love your work!
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:iconcrystal-the-vixen:
Crystal-The-Vixen Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Feels kinda rapey don't you think?
I don't think coercion is something Donnie would do.
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:iconjasminealexandra:
JasmineAlexandra Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student General Artist
this was part 2 & no... Donnie wouldn't... but I can see him being a tease...HELLOOOOOO NURSE!
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:iconcrystal-the-vixen:
Crystal-The-Vixen Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Haha, okay.
Are you planning to make part 3?
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:iconshellshockertmnt117:
ShellshockerTMNT117 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Does she have powers or something?
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:iconbproductinz:
BProductinz Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
wait a sec... how long was he standing there? more importantly, how long was he WATCHING before he said anything?!
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:icontheandromedarose-257:
TheAndromedaRose-257 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Professional Photographer
:lmao: Dude.  Didn't think of that until you said this!!
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:iconbproductinz:
BProductinz Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Well, you have to admit: it IS kinda odd that Splinter popped up JUST NOW
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:icontheandromedarose-257:
TheAndromedaRose-257 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Professional Photographer
I'm sure that this is what occurred afterwards:

April (thinking) : CRAP.  How long was he standing th- HE WAS WATCHING.
Splinter (thinking) : *eye twitches* If you two had gone any further...
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:iconbproductinz:
BProductinz Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
He is far too protective of his sons xD
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:icontheandromedarose-257:
TheAndromedaRose-257 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Professional Photographer
I kinda figured that :) I haven't seen the show in YEARS and hardly remember any of it.
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:iconbproductinz:
BProductinz Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
lol XD are you missing out
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:icontheandromedarose-257:
TheAndromedaRose-257 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Professional Photographer
I know O.O  I just watched the first two episodes (new series) today...I am LOVING it again :3
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valentinalunamon Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
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:icontmntbyellsmyth:
TMNTbyEllSmyth Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awh XD that ending is cute!
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Zelgadis55 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Just discovered your art today and gotta say, I am really loving it. You create some of the most beautiful pieces, like your recent "Turtle Bride" I think that was the one that really caught my eye on the side bar while I was reading someone else's fics. But this comic, omg! I was laughing all the way through. I'm not completely into pairings as such, but I don't mind them but seriously! Loved this! Thank you for sharing :-)
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prezaurian Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the characterization you've got here.  Really nice formatting and story flow.  And the expressions were just really fun to look at.  It all put a smile on my face when I was reading.
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:iconlegoluver:
legoluver Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Didn't Master Splinter heard their mushy things while he's in his room?
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:iconadorkablepeanut314:
AdorkablePeanut314 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this so much!!!
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SuperSheekClee1988 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
This is great, I still cannot believe this was deleted because of a bra O.0

I just had two of my Apritello images removed due to "being in convenient positions and in nudity" when it was not even showing anything in regards to actual body parts or fluids :/ I thought these positions were fine as long as they didn't actually show anything until someone reported me as far as what they were doing, they were just kissing in an embrace thats it. It was generally suppose to be more romantic but I guess I was wrong lol what do you think?

As for your comic here, I think that is very unfair considering it was only a bra, at least you has no complaints from anyone since then.
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:iconjasminealexandra:
JasmineAlexandra Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Student General Artist
I think it was the CrAprils who are reporting that BS... because they like to spread the hate & lie about it. They say Apriltello fans are pushy & bullies when it is actually the other way around. They like to lie & be pushy to others... even call people "Apriltello fans" like it is a derogatory phrase. I have found that Apriltello fans are accepting & patient & very supportive to each other while CrApril fans are pushy & hateful & like to make other fan-pairings look bad.
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SuperSheekClee1988 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
Really? I had no idea thats what they think of us.. man, I was never pushy when it came to Casey and April being together, it sucks but what can you or I do? Its not like we cannot grow up and except the facts when something doesn't happen like you'd hope.

I adore Apritello a lot but I don't see any point into going into shipping wars, or though some anti stuff that people post are funny, but I don't  agree with it most of the time, unless it was a direct insult to a group of people on either side.

Some people who are into Apritello can be as bad as well which is possibly why some Capril fans would think that while some Capril fans are not excepting to begin with. I like to believe that there are some Capril fans that are more excepting. They wouldn't agree with us, but they wouldn't try to go through certain extremes like a few of them already have.

Its not like we all think "I have to destroy every iota to the opposition of Capril fans" because most of us know that its childish and it wouldn't get us anywhere. If this person was a Capril fan, man, like, chill out. Just because an Apritello fan art is ever so popular, doesn't mean its actually cannon and the same goes for any Capril fan art. This person was possibly jealous just because they cannot make any comics as fantastic as yours. Seriously, you have to be one of the best artists I have seen on DA :)

Sorry for the long reply lol
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:iconthorman:
thorman Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
cool what great pic of the donnie and april is awesome is one great work congraluations friend:D
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:iconseth-de-verrde:
seth-de-verrde Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Student Photographer
oh my glob this is brilliant lolo great job:happybounce: CURSE YOU! 
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tea78iscool Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014
cool.^^
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S6ixtyF4our Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful art, its so colorful and wonderfully done. I love Donnie and April, before the cartoon began I always thought it'll be Raph and April but the show made it even better when they wrote Don crushing on April.
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:iconwinterbornbree:
Winterbornbree Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Are you going to make a third comic? I can easily see some more oneshots in the future. :D
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:iconnakuru-nebelung:
Nakuru-Nebelung Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014
I simply adore how you did the smoke :love:
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:iconescritora2aliasfox:
Escritora2Aliasfox Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
so MASTER SPLINTER KNOWS!!!!?? O.o
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:iconjasminealexandra:
JasmineAlexandra Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Student General Artist
no he doesn't... but he is getting suspicious... Conan Edogawa Emoji-03 (Too bad) [V1] 
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:iconpegfan:
pegfan Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Love it 
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:iconasdtre:
asdtre Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
im just like :OMGsqueeeee.... then im like:Pink Squee then:X3 Emote :eeeee: 
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supergirlsboy Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oops, I missed some stuff on my critique. Oh well...
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:iconbenrg:
BenRG Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013
April, vanishing on Donnie and Mikey? Well that isn't even actually hard once you have the basic skills; those two are a so random and absent minded, it's easy to get away from them. If you managed it against Raph or Leo? Well, then I'd be impressed. Do it with Splinter? Well, then it would be the time to discuss just who is the 'Master'. ;)
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:iconprincessvanina:
princessvanina Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ese donie es un loquillo jajaja
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:iconjasminealexandra:
JasmineAlexandra Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Student General Artist
él está loco por ella.Love
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:iconpimpypants:
Pimpypants Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
loL!
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graphicdesignerjulie Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Professional General Artist
ahhhhh i love it! how u tell the story is amazing and just the way anyone would want it :D ur art style is soooo good too love it all :]
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ARHitms12569 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
Oh Mikey! You cock-block! XD
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FIMMLP-Fluttershy Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013
LOL!!!!
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:icontecnocobra:
tecnocobra Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013
wow eso era bastante lógico.
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