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JondumBau+KasumiGoto FanComic 'All the Things He.. by JasmineAlexandra JondumBau+KasumiGoto FanComic 'All the Things He.. by JasmineAlexandra
I do not own Mass Effect or any of the characters. I am just an insignificant insect that is just a fan. All characters belong to ęBioWare


Ever wanted to say one thing but ended up saying another? Guess something got him off kilter.


P.S. I AM GOING ON HIATUS FOR 2 MONTHS....Something came up & I am out of here Sunday...


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Phage-Marrowice Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
This is awesome. Never thought of this idea, but it's brilliant. Latest one is best, as some of the inner dialogue in the first ones is a little too much of an infodump, while the walls of text in this chapter is perfectly in character as speed-talking salarian bumbling. Really funny all of it, but this page is best.
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Petarjebivetar Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice one!
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myks0 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh my, just finished reading... why so little? it's very good!
i found this comic when you were asking someone for feedback on it, i thought it was going to be another poorly drawn fancomic with boring charactes and badly thought, but this... it's very good alreaedy:) do you plan on making this long?
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JasmineAlexandra Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Student General Artist
well actually no but then...I want to do more...just that I had to leave the state for a few weeks...months actually & hope to be home soon & finish this baby up...wish me luck.
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myks0 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wishing you luck, keeping fingers crossed!
nice work, it has to be continued :heart:
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ErsbethShadowsong Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Two months?? I only can think the amount of work this implies...
Ok, I'll patiently wait here, I have :popcorn:

Keep up the great work!!
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JasmineAlexandra Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student General Artist
btw... I dislike this page the most. I had to do this in a hurry because I was given such short notice before I had to leave for Army training. So I want to redo the 4th psnrl... I think I should have hidden ALL of her face in her hair & make her hair darker... Also erase the white lines in it.
I will be home soon to fix it... Thank you so much for looking at my comics. It mean so much to me that you did.
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ErsbethShadowsong Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Mmm... some panels could work with Kasumi's hair darker and coverining her face and eye lines. But that would make panel 4 seem odd. Unless you changed the POV or her hair. Other thing you could do, is divide the dialogue from panel 2 into smaller panels showing in fashbacks what Jodum is saying. But this is only an opinion :)
Hey! I'm sorry I didn't do it as soon as you asked me. I must improve my reply time ;)
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JasmineAlexandra Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student General Artist
I am actually in another state for Army training so I am not able to do art or anything. I miss DA & all you guys. I sneak in at night & use a friend's smart phone to leave comments. I miss everyone... I miss my pen pad!
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ErsbethShadowsong Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Army training? Is that something mandatory in the States?
Ouch!! As soon as you come back we have to do some collaboration together!!! We miss you too!!
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masseylass Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this comic!! :heart:
I'm uber excited to see where this goes ^^
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tanuki-kage Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012
awwh, you're gone so soon? But nobody else draws this ship. ;_;
I enjoyed our discussion of uh possible salarian xenobiology

Poor Bau. Open mouth, insert foot.
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FlyingLimes Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012
o3o
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Forward-Darkly Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'll attempt to cope with the temperary loss, maybe you'll have fanart waiting for you when you get back~
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tamalero Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
definitively going to miss your comics! :(
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arachnophile Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
SUCH a Salarian moment. ;-p I love it. I love Salarians, perhaps because I'm given to rambling.
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Ngoc12 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG! My poor little heart near stopped when I saw this in my inbox!
I love Jondum's analyzation of Kasumi and her ways! It so matches the Salarian archtype and it gives more details to the thief that is Kasumi. So much substance in 5 panels!! You never cease to blow me over. Oh, Kasumi's expressions are so touching.
A little suggestion I would have for this though is that perhaps in panel four, you would raise Kasumi's bubble a little bit higher than Jondum's. Because that would imply that after her sigh, she gave a moan and turned around.
Jondum: "Crime can only let you live so long. Perhaps it is in memory of... Oh! Miss Goto... Pardon me... Oh, I was babbling, wasn't I?"
Kasumi: (Sigh) "Mmmhhmmm...."
Jondum: "Miss Goto... Did I... Are you alright?.... Miss Goto?"
Anyway, have a nice break!
ps
Did you get the scrap link I sent you?
pps
There's a typo in here where Jondum slips and calls her Miss Kasumi instead of Miss Goto in panel 3. And in panel one, she calls him Mr. Bau-san instead of just plain Bau-san.
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JasmineAlexandra Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Student General Artist
I did & I love it!!! Wow what a pose! But I have barely anytime to do anything. My plane is taking off this Sunday... COuld you be able to sail this ship while I am gone? I need someone to keep the momentum going. I hate leaving a comic like this & I have such enthusiasm for it... I swear when I get back, I owe you big, I will do some kick ass line art to your sketches. You rock btw... I am going to tweak the dialog a bit like you said... good eye.
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Ngoc12 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad that you approve of the pic. Do you think that I draw well enough that you can see what is what? If you do think I draw well enough, would you say that you don't need me to do colour versions of sketches anymore? It's not that I don't enjoy it but it seems sort of... too much when there's crappy copies of a good version. Maybe I should take down my scraps now since you had already coloured it.
Anyway, glad you approve of it, despite it being a stock image.
Of course I'll still continue drawing for this ship when you're gone! Not only will I do more WIP-sketches(if you would still like to colour them) for my scrapbook, but I'll also do finished pieces of the pairing as well!
Hope you have a good time on your trip.
I'll get back to you in two months(oh, I'll be counting down the days...). Do send me a message when you get back for me to send you the links.
Have a nice time.
:love: :affection: :dalove:
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JasmineAlexandra Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Student General Artist
leave them up. they rock too! besides that would take almost half the Bau+Goto fan pictures from the Browse... I love them... Also they helped me, so they deserve a place. I will give you heads up...
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Ngoc12 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No need to reply to this message.

Okay, I'll leave them up and continue colouring just to add more bulk to the fan pairing.
Have fun going away.
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faynyx Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nononononononon no hiatis what will i look forward to????
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Turian-Lover Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think he might pass out if that hand of his makes contact with her back, lol : )
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Tifa-the-Strange Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
Oh sheet D8

Oh, Bau XD
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