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JondumBau+KasumiGoto FanComic 'Goodnight Miss Goto by JasmineAlexandra JondumBau+KasumiGoto FanComic 'Goodnight Miss Goto by JasmineAlexandra
I do not own Mass Effect or any of the characters. I am just an insignificant insect that is just a fan. All characters belong to ęBioWare


Phew... well here is the last page for this chapter of my favorite ME couple. I love how Mr. Bau-San is not someone who gets pushed around easily unless it is Miss Goto nudging next to him... Well... if a cute girl in a towel can give any alien a run for his money.


<---Previous Episode/Next Episode---> ...THE END (for now...)


Check it out from the beginning----->...
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:icongarrus368:
garrus368 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2015
continue, please :)
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fugimoto Featured By Owner May 4, 2015
and so the kleptomaniac stole the specters heart! :iconbanzaiplz:
lmao epic!
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1028Wizard Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2016
epic indeed! I saw let this continue
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Sleepy-Onigiri Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Please make more of them! I totally love this pairing*o*
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WhiteLynx57 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014
Do more! These two are adorable!
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:iconmidnightprime:
MidnightPrime Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This was an interesting read. Never thought about this pairing much. I like it
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:iconjasminealexandra:
JasmineAlexandra Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student General Artist
I take it you will ship it then? :D (Big Grin) 
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:iconmidnightprime:
MidnightPrime Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yup. I approve. :D
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geoffrey68200 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013
this is the end ?
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:iconcitronnellepetal:
CitronnellePetal Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013
OMG OMG! :faint: *dies from cuteness overload* :aww:
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Artemistak137 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
this is very cute and romantic dammit ME pairings are the best also who else thinks Kasumi is Still one of the badass of this series?
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ActuallyFenHarel Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Professional Writer
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
*flails*
I want to see more of this! TOO friggin cute and sexy!
MOAR I say, MOARRRR! :XD:
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gameguy199 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Student Writer
VERY CUTE!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
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Phage-Marrowice Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012
Cute. I'm a little sad that you say this is the last page, and hopeful because you say of this chapter.

Not more to be said.
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jessypet92 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I loved this! It's such a beautiful story, and I have always like Kasumi and wished for her to be with someone else then the memories of Keiji. Jondum Bau fits perfectly for that role. :)
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Miri1987 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
Panel 4, her eye we see there is magnificent!! Amazing job!!
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:iconchelidoni:
Chelidoni Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
Wow! Your comics about this couple are so well done. I love them like I love this couple! :heart:
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brightsunthewolf Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Noooo,plz dont end this,I would like to see more of this couple ^^
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DevinShadowV Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well well well how about that :D
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tamalero Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
what an awesome comic, thank you for making it :D
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Wisky-08 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
More please. :)
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GrayBeast Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
AAAwwww. yay for 'happy ending'!
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Ngoc12 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I would write a critique if I could, yet I am still apprehensive that you may deem me unfair and my watchers would know and I would lose credibility and gahh!!! Now I'm rambling!

First off, I just about died when I saw this in my inbox. I was already having a headache from a tiring day today and yet as soon as I saw this, I was like, "OhmyfuthermuckingGod!!"
Before I even clicked to enlarge the deviation, I noticed Kasumi's face and was at first a little disappointed with you. I had thought that you had taken a picture of someone and just stuck in the middle of the comic. Yet, upon looking I realized that it was drawn, not a photograph pasted in! Well done with the artwork! Well done!!
The changes that you made from the rough draft in your scrapbook is much appreciated and even adds more to the UST!! Instead of him playing with her hair while she slept, you had her kiss him on the front of his face(where exactly, may I ask?)!!! Your linework and compositions are very evocative and always a pleasure to look at. I especially loved the fifth panel: Kasumi so close to Bau that her nose is pressed against his face, her hand carressing his face(though where is the other one, I wonder... on his knee? :love:), and (forgive me for my male gaze moment) Bau's arm between Kasumi's cleavage... Bau definitely looks good when he smiles and looking at his arm... I wonder where his hand is. A deviation of this panel without the dialogue would definitely be great!!! Would you consider posting it up?
Bau's colouring job is an improvement from the last page and I've noticed that the colours and lines of this page are very striking compared to its previous pages yet has a sort of romantic gaussian effect. This is quite effective in emphasizing that the last pages' conflict is being resolved.

Speaking of differences from your previous pages, I have noticed that as Bau's skin complexion changes, so does the colour of Kasumi's hair. This isn't too much of a bad thing, I just thought that I should point it out. However, consistentcy is quite important, especially when drawing a comic page. Although the close up of Kasumi is dazzling and shows a great improvement of your skill, it stands out too much. For the last five pages, there is the comic for of Bau and Kasumi and suddenly in the middle of this page, you see a realistic Kasumi and then it returns back to comic form. It's not bad but it is a bit strange to see. I would suggest that you had saved this chance of drawing a realistic Kasumi for a seperate deviation instead of having it share the spotlight with the comic.
I see that Kasumi is calling Bau "-san" again, but she says, "Mr. Bau-san." Is this perhaps a typo?
Also, as a side note, I had liked the last panel of the rough draft when they are sleeping and he had hs hand on her back, a very lover-like gesture. I'm not complaining, but I had hoped to see that scene... This was not a justified critique, just a side question.

My critique-ing may sound mean, but overall, this is a very beautiful page! The details are well drawn! I love your shading and the folds in the towel and jondum's shirt! Very eye-appealing!! The dialogue, especially Bau's in the first panel, is well-written and brings strong feelings to mind. Not only are you an amazing artist, you have quite a knack for dialogue, making it distinctive for each character and reducing anybody who reads this to a puddle of 'squee!' The comic effects involving hearts are very cute and heightens(seemingly impossible, but you did it!) the unresolved sexual tension between Bau and Kasumi. I must tell you that Bau's nervous expression is positively delightful! The comic so far has been a pleasure to read and view!!

May I have your permission to draw another version of "the morning after" because as I had mentioned that this page is evocative, it has definitely given me more ideas for this pairing!!

Another side note: I noticed that in the first panel with Kasumi in the towel, there is the panty-line. So she's wearing panties. But what about a bra?....:suggestive: And what else is that I see? She's wearing a towel to sleep.... My, my, my...

Anyway, great artwork and I hope to see more of this pairing from you again!!!
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JasmineAlexandra Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Well as for the painted one... I was thinking of painting the whole page in that style but it took me hours & hours to do Kasumi's face & even then, the eyes were of. I was exhausted and resolved to go back to the way it was... except I did like that small frame of her face so I let that part stay in the comic.. yes the colors change.. I try to make them the same but I can only guess the photograph filter on the saturation & contrast... it never comes out the same, even though I put in the same numbers... so I guess I am still learning.

As for a panty line...yes she is wearing panties... I mean she is comfortable but not insane to sleep with a guy with just a towel...maybe bra-less & topless but not without panties.

As for missing limbs, it is on laps or under hair... or just behind... I used poses & you never see full arms there so I did the same... as I said before, I am still learning.

As for Kasumi calling him, "Mr. Bau-San" again, she is not mad anymore & adds a san in the end of his name when she is trying to be cute. Like she used to call Shepard in the game...

I am happy you like this
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Ngoc12 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
What a quick reply!

Oh, I wanted to comment this upon looking at the picture again. I love the close up of Kasumi's face because you can see her eyes. The shade of grey is beautiful! Reminds me of Athena, grey-eyed goddesss of wisedom and battle.
The painted frame is not so bad in the middle of the story. It can be like Kasumi through Bau's eyes. Though I love the details in the painting: the eyelids, the shine on the bridge of the nose and lips, the shadows...
If you haven't any plans yet for this pairing, I would be curious to see a realistic painting of Bau and Kasumi, maybe in civilian clothing or someting.

Ah, but would you mind if I could do a second 'morning after' shot? I am feeling inspired!
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JasmineAlexandra Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Student General Artist
run with ti chica;... the more of these pairings are out there, the better.
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Ngoc12 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yayaazzzz!!!
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BlooRibbondrop Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
gorgeous :')
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jack104 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Student Filmographer
yaaaay! love this comic. i hope to see more!^^
and is this a new style? gurl, everytime i see your work its different. (not in a bad way) do you just keep improving over night? what program are you using? cuz this is AMAZZZING! the texture is just divin! it kinda looks realistic yet cartoony at the same time, kasumi looks soft to he touch (i mean those kissable lips look ~so soft~)
jondum, you lucky dog you
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Turian-Lover Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love this!
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